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![[Custom Track] Fruitless Dream](http://aicon.ngfiles.com/icon_default.gif){kind=icon}
some of the notes sound confused at the end... as do the drums... mostly down to timing I think...
Author's Response:
Yeah, I suppose the drum part is a bit off when it gets to about 1:14, because the beat turns to sixteenth notes...
But I am not sure what you mean by notes sounding confused.
Thank you for the input though.
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well you did a fair job at it...
shame this.. gifted but twisted band cant write any origional lines, but eh.
not bad.
Author's Response:
Haha thanks...lol
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you achieved you're goal with the mood! :D
Author's Response:
Making people happy is something I aim for ! :)
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sounds rather like old dream theater to me :p the progression is very james bond but that was never anything but ace :D
gj's
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Thanx.
That was part of a contest I made here on NG ... now is all forgotten :(
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Imo: needs operatic voice like nightwish or something like Iced earth or Symphony X
or if you were lucky enough to find someone like opeth's clean singing...
Author's Response:
Can you sing ? PM me if yes ;)
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I like it, reminded me of lemon jelly, could do with some swells and other stuff in the background to keep it immersive..
(and yes the 1234 is a bit annoying :P )
Grats on a cool piece tho!
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Thanx :p
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A very nice piece, full of mystery and excitement the only thing I notace that could use some playing around with is the "Big Swell" which sounds a little confusing...
other than that...
Very well done!
Author's Response:
which big swell? XD say the time or something...
glad you liked it though.
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not bad... The last words tho sound a little out of tune with the melody...
perhaps its just me?
and the song itself (imo) should have more bass in it for a rounder feel.
Author's Response:
Thanks for criticism and review.
Keep listening.
Hayz.
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see if you can find a native instruments library library... they have some good drum samples... variation is vital :P
don't make you're cymbals too loud, and of course as others have stated... work on the voice.
flute metal? certainly different :P
Author's Response:
ok thanks^^ btw, Ive replaced the flute by backpipes and added some stings^^
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Love the oriental feel it has! great mood created!
Author's Response:
Thank you kindly Liau! The original story was that of two Chinese Erhu Violinists speak to each other through their instruments, early in the morning. The ending choir depicts the slowly wakening of the village, to being the day.
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!
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