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hum

some level changes and vocals would do this track a world of good :P

Excellent

This track has the best balance in volume of instruments that you have!
only 2 things I'd have done to this track.
move the 2 guitars away from each other by panning (and using different distortion effects (unless you wanted to keep it mono) and make a more interesting bass line :P

Good work!

Pretty nifty!

it sounds a little peaked at the top end...
(btw which program/ microphone / input do you use to record the guitar?)

Very Cool

Youre tracks are really interesting and well put together!
Nice going!

nifty

not bad... The last words tho sound a little out of tune with the melody...
perhaps its just me?
and the song itself (imo) should have more bass in it for a rounder feel.

Hayz08 responds:

Thanks for criticism and review.
Keep listening.
Hayz.

where am I?

mayhap I have woke up in a bad karaoke where great songs are butchered?

not really my style but...

I think it was generally well put together... some bits I think the volume peaked a bit..
some of the ...random voices I think make it seem even more comical :P

messy

hum, sounds somewhat sloppy...
theres a lot of parts that sounds like there is no >rhythem<.

/m/

IMO: turn up the bass... and watch the peaking... I think the outro goes on too long...
just one round of piano would work for me :P
otherwise good job, like the blends of instruments and melodies (especially all together).

great!

Love the oriental feel it has! great mood created!

MaestroRage responds:

Thank you kindly Liau! The original story was that of two Chinese Erhu Violinists speak to each other through their instruments, early in the morning. The ending choir depicts the slowly wakening of the village, to being the day.

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

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